Ole perdon rede his paper
And suddenly astound..
His Auntie Moneybags ha ded
And left him millun pounds!
He buy hissel a paper sac
To put the munny in
And set off on his trike-a-bike
A wumman for to win.
He mete a woolwoth lady
An take her for a ryd
She say altho he ugly
She plese to be his bride
They buy themself a castle
In Furbington-on-Wye
Thay liv there plenty holiday
An wen they old thay die.
2007-12-19 23:08:44 · 4 answers · asked by lefty 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it !
It's visually AND auditorially (ww?) interesting. That took some thinking, some creativity, and some vision. Good job!
2007-12-20 02:25:29 · answer #1 · answered by skid porpoise 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hello, i don't want to discourage you but that was quite childish,
you know kind of silly & kiddish. sorry! not my type of a poem but to some it may be pleasing. keep writing!!!
2007-12-19 23:48:38 · answer #2 · answered by nix 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fascinating! It would make a great song.
2007-12-19 23:55:33 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Those poems actually hurt my eyes.Not for me !
2007-12-19 23:11:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋