my heart is cold and angry
and my life is all alone
my friends are falling before me
and my career is on its own
my past is now the present
my future gone up in smoke
i have no life to live
and my life is just a joke
my death is what i fear
wait my fear is not my death
my fear is dying slowly
and the coffin in which i rest
for my first love i have lost
and my strength is what i need
for if i fall in love again
i pray my soul to bleed
2007-12-19 15:10:55 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
The last stanza was the best.
call it, "Another casualty."
2007-12-19 15:20:38 · answer #1 · answered by coriafanforlife 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmm, I usually title mine with words that connect to the poem but not repeat any lines. Something that conveys what the poem means to you. Like absence makes the heart grow angry or absence makes the heart grow bitter. instead of fonder.
2007-12-19 23:22:00 · answer #2 · answered by Hannah F 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Search your heart out. What are you trying to convey? Then you'll get your answer. It's an inner instinct and no one but you will' know.
2007-12-19 23:20:31 · answer #3 · answered by SASA 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Past Tense"
2007-12-19 23:41:09 · answer #4 · answered by A*MUSE 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wait.....
2007-12-19 23:19:04 · answer #5 · answered by poe 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
title:
yet another emo poem, kill me along with this poem
2007-12-19 23:24:21 · answer #6 · answered by villainonales 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋
how about "Untitled"?
2007-12-19 23:18:42 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋