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it was so annoying to have to ride the bus everyday and try to fit your school back bag, and your soccer bags all in that bus with 50 other player, but there was no other way to get there only if u drove which most of us didnt.


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2007-12-19 13:56:14 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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it was so annoying to have to ride the bus everyday. it was difficlut to try to fit your back-pack and soocer bag on the bus with 50 other players. there was no other way to get there unless your drove yourself, which most of us didnt.

2007-12-19 14:06:41 · answer #1 · answered by Monika! 3 · 0 0

It was so annoying to have to ride the bus every day, trying to fit your school back bag, and your soccer bags all in that bus with 50 other players, but there was no other way for us to get there.

2007-12-19 22:08:16 · answer #2 · answered by HazMat 4 · 0 0

It was so annoying to have to ride the bus with tons of bags and other players. The only way out of it was to drive, which most of us did not.

2007-12-19 22:05:20 · answer #3 · answered by Heather! 3 · 0 0

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