Christmas Snow Day
I vaugly remember the day we met,
so long ago it was.
With snow everywhere, you slipped and fell,
and pulled me down to you.
We lay there laughing heartily,
and attempted t get up.
And when we did, we smiled and played,
and then sang some christmas songs.
Then running home, we left our prints,
in the beautiful snow covered field.
We lit a fire and laughed some more,
and opened all our gifts.
Though not many did we find,
we joyfully thanked each other.
For meeting each other was definantly,
the best gift that we received.
...it was written for a couple of people,, and has referance to one.. lol. Merry Christmas everyone!!
2007-12-19 11:08:02 · 22 answers · asked by dragonflyy 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Very nice Christmas poem. And we now know why cheep picked that name. She likes cheep shots, lol. Oh, well, I liked it, and many people think my royalty checks are cheesey til they get a look at them. Cheesey sells books. And people who like cheesey buy them, so what's cheesey about that?
Huggles n Squeezles for the holidays.
Dondi
2007-12-19 13:25:04 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Here is a poem
Its Christmas in the air! snowflakes in December Children sit with Santa's toys Their gloves wiping crystalline ice Off shinny plastic Our breath thick like fog Mingles in oneness As we stand back to Look upon the completion Of our Christmas trees Giggling from heady wine And feelings shared Its Christmas in the air!
2007-12-19 19:22:29 · answer #2 · answered by Khalonnie H 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's lovely and I like it even better because of the lack of rhyming.
And as for the person who said you used too "advanced vocab," clearly they should take a high school English class and learn some multisyllabic words.
It's lovely, keep writing!
2007-12-19 19:17:09 · answer #3 · answered by Amanda P 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What a nice poem and so romantic and i totally loved it.It sounds like so much fun with you and your man in the snow.I know your man you wrote it for will adore it so much.
2007-12-20 05:10:24 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem! Snow-covered should be hyphenated.
2007-12-19 19:23:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice poem.
This poem actually reminded me of my ex and the good old times
2007-12-19 19:15:45 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is very sweet. I enjoy the lighthearted, bright atmosphere it presents. I can almost see myself enjoying such a day with someone special...
2007-12-20 14:45:53 · answer #7 · answered by Spiffs C.O. 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Out of curiousity, who was it written for? And who does it refer to?
2007-12-19 22:46:52 · answer #8 · answered by guy h 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2007-12-20 17:41:27 · answer #9 · answered by Semp-listic! 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's good... but you use some too advanced vocab for a poem.
2007-12-19 19:11:04 · answer #10 · answered by jr.tuckluck94 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋