What curse invoked upon me
What damage I have done
What anger swells and divides
me from her?
This world, this horrid peace
without her voice
This desolate existence
with only the reminder
of her Mona Lisa smile
Haunted
Cursed
Wishing for joy and laughter
Hoping my curiosity
hasn't broken the seal
on some forbidden
or half-hidden
treasure
for pleasure
I searched
and found
her unspoken beauty
her delicate balance
transposed
against my carnivorous hedonism
my impetuous nature
to discover
uncover
her secret
And just as her beauty
lit my eyes ablaze
the curse unleashed
imprisoning me
beyond hope
in the fire
of my dark desire
2007-12-19 00:40:49 · 8 answers · asked by Kurt H™ FC Steaua Bucureşti 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Doc: she has ANAlyzed it, but didn't appear to notice it was for her....
2007-12-19 02:43:04 · update #1
Are you trying to make the rest of us look bad? Harrrrrrumph!
2007-12-20 16:49:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Lovely.
2007-12-19 20:15:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
For me too "It Works"
I'd be curious to know, and have asked this of others, have you shared it with the "object" of the piece?
Steven Wolf
2007-12-19 09:07:27 · answer #3 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I thought it worked...
the dark seeks light, the light seeks dark...
a natural sort of logic
2007-12-19 08:45:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love your poems .They are so related to real life.I will be waiting for your more poems.Keep on posting.Keep it up!!!YOU ROCK DUDE
2007-12-19 11:37:47 · answer #5 · answered by Neethu 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like this one too! It has a very natural and honest flow...
2007-12-19 10:06:10 · answer #6 · answered by Analyst 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Too sentimental for my tastes, but I get your point.
2007-12-19 09:20:31 · answer #7 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can you put in other way more like a poem all these ideas?
2007-12-19 09:17:47 · answer #8 · answered by Kinynha 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋