Should I paint my belly yellow,
and disguise what I do know?
What do you people want? Who knows?
So, if you want them I supply new flows.
New style... say I'm not peaceful while I smile.
Even speach with Ignorance can be free.
I support that you're speaking.
But, people seem misguided with me.
The way I handle words, poetically...
they call it simple, forgettably.
If you have a mind, wake it up.
If you have a hobby, take it up.
My hobbies are many
You want me tortured?
On a jet like Benny?
Or to fall off my game like Penny?
I know the word-hustle.
I've known some strong mental muscles.
I know how to tussle, but don't do it.
I know I could probably have you touched for free.
But, no matter how much you hate my love grows.
If you don't....somone/something up above knows.
2007-12-19 00:13:31 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like that, dude.
2007-12-19 00:24:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, this isn't exactly what I imagined when I saw the question.
What defines bittersweet love in these lyrics? The fact that you don't tussle even though you "know how to"? How you you know you could "probably" have touched whomever for free? You being able to supply new flows? Why are you referencing Benny and the Jets? Who is Penny, and why should I care? What are any of your hobbies, and why would we want you to be tortured? I mean, besides for writing this?
You don't develope the theme of love. You don't develope a sub-theme of bittersweetness or of hatred. I'm not sure exactly what's going on, but it has nothing to do with bittersweet love.
I'm kinda curious how you're using the word "hate" here. I'm trying not to imagine a teenage kid dressed in saggy name brand jeans with a backwards cap sporting a crucifix or some other trendy christian fashion accessory trying desperately to "keep it real" with his "positive flows"...
*rolling eyes*
I have no idea if that describes you or not, but that's certainly what I think of when I read this.
Saul
2007-12-19 04:30:20 · answer #2 · answered by Saul 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
wow i really enjoyed reading that i love poems thank you so much for sharing :0)
2007-12-19 04:12:39 · answer #3 · answered by this account is no longer in use 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'probably touched for free'...fantastic line!!! Enigmatic line!
I'm sorry, I really don't understand this poem...it could be only one cup of coffee this morning, too!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter
2007-12-19 00:38:03 · answer #4 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeh it sounds bitter like you said
2007-12-19 00:25:46 · answer #5 · answered by F34D0RA 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋