what do you think about this poem?

Question

lets leave life for a while
we can swim for miles
lets dream to mars
and just dream our lifes away
"look at earth from mars"
it feels great to be this far
pain is not here
lifes are not in jars
oh how i'd do anything to stay this far

Answer 1

sounds romantic. Problem is that even that far there wouldn't be peace.
nice escapist piece after all. Yes, it's nice to escape the ravages and nightmares of this world even if only in dreams and visions.

Good attempt. be encouraged to write more.
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