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Question

And tell me what you think of them okay!=]

http://www.poemhunter.com/serena-peters/

Answer 1

Serena, (I guess that's your real name) those are great poems. I like the style of Silly and the profundity of "My World Is Collapsing" especially the way these lines open:

My world
as i know it
as you know it
is breaking apart

* correct the spelling of "collapsing"

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Those are indeed some of the best well-written poems around.
Good luck and compose more since it seems, you've access to a publisher.

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