old man
sits alone.
a babe in the woods,
dead duck
easy prey.
offer a soft touch
i do.
take the old man home.
is this your last christmas?
he nods,unknowingly.
shot of bourbon..
i give.
gratefulness given
with lost eyes
good night
old man...
sleep away.
don't forget to remember
each and every one of us,
can be this
old man
on christmas day.
sleep away a good time.
D.
2007-12-17 10:54:49 · 5 answers · asked by dorian 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You show such compassion, it is as a gift for the reader. In just these few words, and with a wonderful style so all your own, you bring the images to life. Thank you and Merry Christmas.
2007-12-17 11:56:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
YES!! human kindness on christmas day. i love it
the sad thing is, most of the time people don't even think that could happen and dont think to give such charity.
best of luck and keep writing
2007-12-17 19:22:16 · answer #2 · answered by gretch 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Applause. I like it. I also closely relate to it. Good on ya.
Steven Wolf
2007-12-17 19:08:05 · answer #3 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
D33p and well written, love your style *^_^*
2007-12-17 19:22:31 · answer #4 · answered by TrollHunter 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
UMM...that was kind of disturbing but I like ur way of writing... just ur idea
2007-12-17 19:07:01 · answer #5 · answered by Mango b. 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋