Just wrote this very quickly as inspired by the line below...
"..started getting serious and writing serious rhymes..." ( Benefit, "My Story")
..turn on the news seeing serious crimes
had me feeling it was wrong to feel fine
then i had a taste of the divine
this spirit of mine
happy on the outside
inside crying
soldiers in innocence dying
politicians conatantly lying
reporters are distorters
taking their orders
with my own two eyes
i want the truth
i want true proof
but what does that mean?
Copyright © 12/16/2007
2007-12-17 08:02:16 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
so the average man tries to forget it
alcoholics will regret it
less so, with the leaves of green
it enhances the mind if used correctly
by correct minds
family
respect thine
help where needed
keep them reading
2007-12-17 08:04:38 · update #1
less alcohol is what i want of my brother
i want it for his and my mother
races/beliefs...
respected by respectable others
2007-12-17 08:06:19 · update #2
http://youtube.com/watch?v=9MBDXYuIrpM
2007-12-17 08:10:08 · update #3
I don't see it as an either/or situation. Free-style rap can be poetry (and not just verse) if the subject matter is universal enough, the thought behind it is deep enough and the word choices are inspired enough.
I'll be honest with you - I'm not (usually) a big fan of rap. But I do like what you wrote.
I think you have talent - and what's (to me) equally important, you are speaking the truth.
2007-12-17 08:09:58 · answer #1 · answered by johnslat 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a freestyle poem. Rap is music. Poetry is written or spoken. If you put this to music it can become a rap.
2007-12-17 16:15:54 · answer #2 · answered by migrainegirl1 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a rap to me.
2007-12-17 16:09:48 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
free-styled rap 2 slam, excellent work my friend *^_^*
2007-12-17 19:33:25 · answer #4 · answered by TrollHunter 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
freestyle poem
2007-12-17 16:10:33 · answer #5 · answered by OkiDoki 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋