Please look at my MTG Deck and give me sum feedback?

Question

I made this Giant deck and was curious to see some opinions and see maybe sum sugestions from people......

4x battle mastery
4x- tarfire
4x O-Ring
4x- shock
4x Triclopean Site
4x WOG
4x Stinkdrinker daredevil
2X Blind Spot Giant
2x sunrise sovereign
2x Heart Cage Giant
2x Brion Stout arm
2x thundercloud Shaman
2x cloud goat ranger
2x Lair watch giant
1x Hamletback Goliath

11x mountain
11x plains


I don't mind any criticism, I just want some honest feedback

thanks alot

Answer 1

to me i would replace tarfire with incinerate - for the mana incenerates better (my opinion)

I would replace your Triclopean sight with Whitemane Lion. since youll be able to bounce any creature

You dont seem to have alot of goblins in your deck so Stinkdrinker daredevil is not really gonna help. I would replace it with Spark Elemental since youll be swinging with a 3/1 trample haste creature. for 1 red mana

cloud goat ranger is a good card but honestly if your going to have 3 1/1 kithkins in play what happens if someone destroys one of them, then you wont be able to use cloud goat rangers ability. I would recommend Calciderm instead for a 5/5 with vanishing who cant be that target of spells or abilities, then you can use whitemane lions ability to bounce Calciderm anytime. Plus, calciderm costs 1 less then cloud goat ranger

Hamletback giant is good but late game its gonna be a "ugum smash" and maybe to late to play....hmm what about a clockwork hydra? it will cost 5 to play and you can pump it and not only that when you remove a counter you will constantly be pinging your opponent. Or a Phyrexian Soulgorger from coldsnap (which is type 2)?Phyrexian Soulgorger is an 8/8 for 3 mana its ability is : cumulative upkeep sacrifice a creature. this will be a good "IN YOUR FACE" type of creature.

i would also sideboard in some blaze as well X and 1 red. deals damage equal to X to target creature or player. Theres a land from coldsnap thats type 2 legal that cumulitive upkeep add 1 red to your mana pool. its good on mana acceleration BUT it can hurt you