i wrote it and it's called I Love You
When i see you
I get this feeling
That the love we share
Makes me want to go neeling
I have never loved anyone
in my life
it feels so good
having you in my life
When we kissed
i felt something
it was just
so loving
When i hug you
I don't wanna let go
everybody else
just said no
I love you
so much
I want to know
if you feel the same way
so what do you think of it? if you don't like it that's fine. it's my first poem. i have 28 others
2007-12-16 11:42:35 · 8 answers · asked by Mighitman 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
How can it be your first poem, if you have 28 others?
2007-12-16 11:47:00 · answer #1 · answered by Julia 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not always need to rhyme however it demands to hit my feelings. I consider readability of expression is primary as good. I do not love to moment bet what I'm studying approximately. I continuously appear for what I time period "poetic gem stones"within the textual content.
2016-09-05 12:46:54 · answer #2 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sweet! Keep them coming!
2007-12-16 11:46:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok but maybe cut it down to the best bits
2007-12-16 11:45:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's sweet... a bit confusing... but sweet!
2007-12-16 11:46:58 · answer #5 · answered by Karen C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
charming
2007-12-16 11:45:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's sweet :)
2007-12-16 11:47:33 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWWWWWWwwwww...............
2007-12-16 11:50:05 · answer #8 · answered by kitten lover3 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋