What do you think of my Christmas story? It wont let me put the whole thing so it doesnt look that good. But..

Question

To Fly into the Sky


Rainy and muggy, humid, and crazy weather the elf’s never saw in the North Pole.

“Are you sure this is the North Pole?” asked Kit the Elf.
“Well there is Santa’s house, and-” said Brea the elf being interrupted by Erica the elf.
“Are you kidding, yeah this is the North Pole!”

Kit pulled Rudolph into the barn, and Brea unpacked the other reindeer. While Erica stood outside and stared at Diyler the fairest of them all as the girls called him. Diyler was the boy that every girl dreamed of being married to. Except he was a elf.

“Hello Kit and Brea. How were the reindeer on the trail?” asked Santa.
“Hello Santa! THEY WERE GREAT!” the girls shouted happily!
“Thanks for getting them out there for there exercise.”
“No problem Santa! We’ll do it anytime!”

Santa pulled up his fat, and marched out of the barn and helped up the elf’s who dropped toys loading up in the toy shed. Who slipped on ice and tripped Santa on accident and Santa fell to his bottom.

Answer 1

It is a good start. The last sentence needs a grammatical edit.