its a song me and my friend wrote
hell froze over
heaven in flames
noowhere to go
i lost this game
everything i knew turned into lies
except for the fact of my own demise
what is this life about
you live you die
you scream you shout
you fall apart you dont kno why
every miserable day you cry
my heart is punctured by satans bite
if only i can see the light
my heart is cold
as blocks of ice
thoughts in my head
not so nice
every1 grows
while i shrink
imso scared
its hard to think
oh how i wish i could be more like u
just to be normal what should i do
and then the chorus goes again
2007-12-16 07:39:31 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
um i accidentally put this in the wrong catagory srry
2007-12-16 07:41:38 · update #1
pretty good. Ozzy Osbourne writes some mental mind mixers similiar to your poem and he is stinking rich.
2007-12-16 07:57:30 · answer #1 · answered by minda 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't think you put this in the wrong category at all. I think you either consciously or unconsciously posted this because you're depressed and confused, and may know it, or may not. When I was a teen, I wrote poetry...very sad poems, sometimes angry ones...but mostly sad. I was going through a lot, and I didn't know what was wrong with me but I felt sad and depressed most all of the time. Writing down how I felt helped me cope with my feelings. It was also a cry for help. Please talk to someone about how you feel. Preferrably someone that is an adult...someone that you trust. If you don't have anyone to talk to, you can email me. (Either way, you can email me if you want to.) Your song reminds me of my own past. Maybe I can help you?
2007-12-16 15:48:47 · answer #2 · answered by It's Ms. Fusion if you're Nasty! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's really good but a bit violet. I mean, it's ur song so what-ev.
Happy Holidays âº
2007-12-17 17:37:09 · answer #3 · answered by LiveUrDreams12 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like the first line but the rest is great!
2007-12-16 15:46:58 · answer #4 · answered by Mallary 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sad, but people mite seal it Patten it.
2007-12-16 15:53:29 · answer #5 · answered by Foxlink 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You should sell to MCR.
2007-12-16 15:47:24 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it sound good
you can put it on youtube.com
2007-12-16 15:44:10 · answer #7 · answered by frenchi 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋