what i want to say is
" It is very disappointing and offensive that you are porn addicted and cannot give up any chance you get to have sex nad date others when you still have me as your girlfriend "
I know this sentence is a bit weird to you but I want a correct grammer in shorter sentence that has all my point in it. If you know any other word that could be replaced in this sentence let me know please..tnx all
2007-12-16 03:58:00 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
nad is and yes. typing error!
2007-12-16 04:02:20 · update #1
I'm russian and my english is not that good. sorry.
2007-12-16 04:03:17 · update #2
"Your porn addiction and infidelity are hurtful, especially since you turn down real-life intimacy with me."
2007-12-16 04:02:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is very disappointing and offensive that, you're a porn addicted. Also that you cannot give up any chance you get to have sex, and date others when you still have me as your girlfriend.
I would add something on the end like, "And if you can't fix this, I will. By cutting you out of the picture."
& sweetie, I'd loose that bum as fast as possible.
2007-12-16 04:03:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very disappointing and offensive that you are a porn addict and cannot give up any chance you get to have sex and date others when you still have me as your girlfriend
you got it all right exept the "a" before porn and just addict not addicted
2007-12-16 04:01:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your way
"It is very disappointing and offensive that you are porn addicted and cannot give up any chance you get to have sex and date others when you still have me as your girlfriend"
My Way.
"I am very disappointed and offended, that you're porn addicted and can't give a chance away with having sex, while you still have me as your girlfriend."
I hoped I helped.
2007-12-16 04:05:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is very disapointing and offensive that you are addicted to porn and will not give up any chance to have sex and date others when I am still your girlfriend.
2007-12-16 04:04:10 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very disappointing and offensive that you are a porn addict and can't give up any chance you get to have sex and date other women when i'm still your girlfriend! >:0
haha. well sorry about the situation, hope you get through it! [:
best wishes
&& your englishh is finne hunn!
2007-12-16 04:04:44 · answer #6 · answered by aamaandaaa! 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I can correct grammar, but I don't know what grammar is. If someone is doing this, grammar shouldn't matter! and with after sex, and change nad to and and change when to while
2007-12-16 04:01:25 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-10-01 22:40:34 · answer #8 · answered by haslam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Either you cut it out,or I`m cutting out.
2007-12-16 04:02:21 · answer #9 · answered by jms043 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
"You're a sick Pig" (that's the correct way to write, spell, and word that statement)
2007-12-16 04:04:11 · answer #10 · answered by Udontnome (ad space for sale) 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋