simmering and bright
a droplet of hope
a stream of faith
an overflow of happyness
this one thing can show
a tear
2007-12-15 19:56:02 · 2 answers · asked by gretch 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
sorry i type fast and some times i skip letters
Its
Shimmering i usualy do that when i'm half
asleep and when my best poetry comes out
2007-12-15 20:30:26 · update #1
"happyness" too is a victim of your fast typing.
Pay attention, . . . . mind it's correct spelling?
These two lines capture the optimistic tone:
a droplet of hope
a stream of faith
Like a tear-drop, the little hope is actually a whole stream. It happens to us all. That is a perfect excellent metaphor.
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2007-12-16 01:25:59 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
shimmering or simmering, didn't know tears could get hot, then again, if you're in the sun...
oh nevermind, Merry Christmas!
nice words ;-)
2007-12-16 04:01:24 · answer #2 · answered by :::cognac & cuban cigars::: 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋