This girl was different
Nobody liked her
They tried to stay away
But no one could fight her
One day this girl
Fell in love
With a boy who seemed perfect
Like he was from up above
The boy and the girl
Never really meet
They just keep their distance
Who would commit such a feat?
Since this boy was a jock
And this girl was a nerd
But this boy had a soft spot
With this girl who was a nerd
If a jock and nerd went out
Which never really happens
News spreads fast
She would get it real fast
One day this girl took a risk
With this boy she never kissed
She asked him out
He said “No, why would we ever go out?”
This girl goes away
Cries in the bathroom
Alone by herself
With those stale, cold cashews
Alone again in her room
She made a big decision
And now the razor in her hand
Made a hole in her heart
Only just because
They were supposed to be apart
Next day at school
He went to her locker
Opened it closely
And found a note loosely
The note said and I quote
“I will love you forever and ever."
2007-12-15 15:48:15 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
this is more like a story to me... buht what do i know, im only a 6th grader.... lol! but yeah this is really nice!!! i would giv it a 10 out of 10!!!!! for real! its very touching!
thanx for sharing the poem
2007-12-15 16:00:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would give it a seven. It's emotional and it makes u think about how stuff like this really happens. How the popular guys never notice the nerdy girls. It makes me feel bad because i've turned down a lot of "nerdy nice" guys just because i'm afraid of what people might say but your poem is good u should think about writing more.
2007-12-15 23:54:18 · answer #2 · answered by Blondy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
With all due respect, and a smile, I agree with "Fright Wig Guy." :)
Very bluntly, I'm saddened by anyone asking "Do You Like It?" No offense. As I have said often, "If I stressed over what others thought, I might have shelved any or all of my passions, long ago.
I won't "rate" it but find it "cute" even if simplistic, and obviously a very personal expression of what is also likely, a very real experience. Keep at at and thanks for sharing.
Steven Wolf
2007-12-15 23:57:55 · answer #3 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a really cool and heart warming poem i identify with the female character even if im a male it did seem that way in highschool but everything changed after. it seems like all the jocks are serving burgers and raising babies but its a really touching poem i like it mind if i keep a copy of it?
2007-12-15 23:53:03 · answer #4 · answered by Juice 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The ending is kind of confusing, why did he go to her locker and how did she know he would read the note? other than the ending i thought it was very good.
2007-12-16 00:01:30 · answer #5 · answered by elephants87 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
People can relate to this poem. It's beautiful. You write great peoms anyway
2007-12-16 11:26:43 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
first as i read your poem i send it to my BF as we love each other madly
your poem is too good that i cant define it
& it is so true,may be yours only
2007-12-16 05:27:11 · answer #7 · answered by love???? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
trophy boy. co-dependency
2007-12-16 00:04:28 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Best poem that I've read all day!!!!!
2007-12-15 23:51:38 · answer #9 · answered by cgreenemax 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋