onvulsionC~esolateD~remblingT
As I lay
doubled over and in dispair
has me in its hold again
the fear controls me and wont bite back and I embrace
is my safe place of sorrow
I hold on never let go
bites at me as I try to purify
only satisfing more
grinning in my hopelessness
fear corodes me and prevents me
watch your step fool
inunderstandable the poison in my mind
my mind throws tanturms of immence strength
looks are thrown at me, I continue
I purify with dirty water from my mind
neverendingconstantperpetualeternal ?
2007-12-15 14:05:12 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
you have a very interesting sence of humor
2007-12-15 14:10:23 · update #1
nicely written
I couldn't write half as good as that.
2007-12-15 14:11:58 · answer #1 · answered by Hornet One 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was kind of confusing but I think I get it.
2007-12-15 22:09:53 · answer #2 · answered by bloodyakiko 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I really like it!
2007-12-15 22:10:13 · answer #3 · answered by Mrs Adorkable 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
love it.
its really deep.
2007-12-16 02:59:37 · answer #4 · answered by Farya 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, if i read EMO poetry i will gauge my eyes out with blunt scissors
2007-12-15 22:08:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 4⤋
omg that was the best poem i ever read. it was very deep and sensetive. loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EMO rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-12-15 23:19:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, this is delightful.
2007-12-15 22:09:10 · answer #7 · answered by NYC Sewers 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
lol that was funny...ha thanks for the laugh
2007-12-15 22:08:38 · answer #8 · answered by I'm afraid of Virginia Woolf 5 · 0⤊ 4⤋