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Shhhhhh
The warmth comes first,
Before the sun even lifts an eye…
I lie and look at your contours
Your golden hair
I watch you fill with each breath and sigh
The whispers inside
Make me wonder of the places you dream of
Am I with you
On your pillow
Or high in the clouds that surround you
Not to awake you…
I cannot resist, a touch
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2007-12-15 13:46:36 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it because you tell us of your truly experience as a romantic one; you express a feeling of warmth when you are gazing at your beloved wife as she is sleeping. However, you cannot keep from enjoying a touch of her body… Did you intend to enjoy yourself alone without awaking her?
2007-12-16 02:03:44 · answer #1 · answered by jbaudlet 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tender, gentle--she is a lucky woman. Your poem elicits a longing in one's heart; are there still men who can look and only touch without going the limit? Are there still men who love like this?
2007-12-16 00:22:09 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very good well thought out and well written. you must love your wife very much. it is a very nice romantic poem in a way but a poem thats not to sappy i love it
2007-12-16 00:43:57 · answer #3 · answered by shelly_noble24 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
... stopped by casually to peruse this piece accumulating so many stars, then. . .!
...certainly, you've got some breath-taking talent and magnificent imagination up there between the ears.
good luck
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2007-12-16 00:09:58 · answer #4 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey, I know her.
Just kidding, bud. She is a lucky lady to be married to a real romantic guy like you.
2007-12-15 15:58:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
So romantic! How wonderfully Lucky she is.
That is So Sweet.
2007-12-15 14:01:03 · answer #6 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Owh...That's just so romantic and poetic! Stoogie should really take a poetry class from you! hahaha
2007-12-15 15:42:19 · answer #7 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It must be the softest thing you have ever written. Beautiful. I love the title too!
2007-12-15 18:49:18 · answer #8 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very nice... Makes me wish someone felt that way about me,in fact.
2007-12-15 14:07:39 · answer #9 · answered by Katie Short, Atheati Princess 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Delicate and lovely. Liked it!
Read it twice 'cause I wanted to.
2007-12-15 13:55:57 · answer #10 · answered by Just Tink 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋