{this was written based on a child at my daughters school, all in haiku, that was tough *^_^*}
All But, Me?
It really gets me
all of the cruel kids at school
saying nasty things.
I have been provoked
and denied before Christmas
and not knowing why?
Separately they talk
to my ear in privacy
together, they're cruel.
They're not fooling me
I know who my real friends are
she is among them
I've shown no bother
and I know it's bugging them
one will step forward
I do not 'need' friends
but, they're sure are nice to have
I really miss them
School will be back in
and forgotten it will be
to them all but, me?
2007-12-15 09:39:05 · 10 answers · asked by TrollHunter 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
No ears, disruptive villain I was. Now that I'm older and wiser, I realise I wasted my free education to look cool in front of others. Stupid!
2007-12-15 09:53:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a nice poem
you wrote,
It certainly talks about the
cruelty in school.
If you were provoked in school
not knowing why the provokers were fools
and had nothing to do
but what goes around comes around
as well as to haunt them
2007-12-16 10:33:35 · answer #2 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was an approx. 40/60% split in favor of villain. I was a totally
different person then.
2007-12-16 18:11:55 · answer #3 · answered by comedycatalyst 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, neither, but I definitely hated the villians more than the victims. Your poem was pretty ok.
2007-12-15 18:17:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
a victim all of the way. But, I still feel that way at times oh well there will be brighter days.
2007-12-15 19:05:49 · answer #5 · answered by loretta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
neither victim nor villain. I was a sweet kid and had sweet friends.
2007-12-15 18:26:08 · answer #6 · answered by autumlovr 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'm the victum when with the guys but the villin when with girls... its an intresting go between.. lol,, fun fun!
2007-12-15 23:10:13 · answer #7 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither . Those were the days ..
2007-12-15 17:53:10 · answer #8 · answered by missmayzie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't feed my friends, either. Once you do that, you never get rid of them.
Oh...'need'...HA!...where's my glasses?
2007-12-15 21:04:40 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
both
2007-12-15 18:31:02 · answer #10 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋