http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12291752
PLEASE rate it!!! a 10 prefereably :D
2007-12-15 09:14:40 · 5 answers · asked by Live2Run 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
that poem is better but im just getting started with writing poetry. i actually wrote "THIS POEM IS AMAZING!!!?"
to catch peoples attention. im not cocky. thanks for your opinion! ill definetly open my vocabulary and try to rhyme better next time :-)
2007-12-15 09:33:46 · update #1
I will not only rate it I will over rate it . This poem is over rated.
2007-12-15 09:36:14 · answer #1 · answered by Form F 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, no, it isn't amazing.
Have a look at Ogden Nash's "Listen"
for tight phrasing and a better pulsing rhythm.
2007-12-15 17:28:59 · answer #2 · answered by Pedestal 42 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
0 I hate poems that rhyme like that and I just hate it
2007-12-15 17:19:03 · answer #3 · answered by Blank 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
forget 10 i give it a 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,009
2007-12-15 17:21:22 · answer #4 · answered by sammi a 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
u juss asked this question.
2007-12-15 17:21:21 · answer #5 · answered by helpizzneeded 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋