By the time you swear you're his,
Shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
Infinite, undying -
Lady make note of this:
One of you is lying.
2007-12-15 07:17:02 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I didn't write it about me
2007-12-15 07:21:24 · update #1
It's awesome! I love it!
-HeartBrokenForever *(Diane N)*
2007-12-15 08:44:03 · answer #1 · answered by ♫Di [Pro-Love, Anti-Hate]♫ 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
As a poet who looks at much of the poetry that people post at Y/A I can tell you that I really enjoy this one.
It is succinct, has a good rhythm to it and is poignant in it's message.
You have much insight for nineteen.
Sometimes discovery is painful.
2007-12-15 08:09:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a good poem, but a bit cynical for such a young lady. Love is fleeting, that is true.
2007-12-15 07:20:34 · answer #3 · answered by Sheriff of Yahoo! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Omg, that is a great poem. Keep posting new poems! Instead of lady put please. plase make note of this one of u is lying.
2007-12-15 07:22:12 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
YES good poem!
keep going on.
2007-12-15 07:25:16 · answer #5 · answered by Warrior 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Another Winner! Add it to the list! Love it.....
2007-12-15 08:40:28 · answer #6 · answered by Bailey 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it, would like to hear more of your poems!
2007-12-15 07:21:40 · answer #7 · answered by Kimmi 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
omg i love that! your great =D
its so true though about some poeple.
your really good =D
dang... i like it a lot!
2007-12-15 08:54:08 · answer #8 · answered by ♥Nothing but the Lies =/ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, I love it. It's a great build up to the last line. :-)
2007-12-17 11:38:04 · answer #9 · answered by Tom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds great but I/m not lying... Are you???
2007-12-18 19:36:30 · answer #10 · answered by M J 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋