sands of time
Deep within my fractured heart,
Strangled by my own cold, dead, hand.
Agony makes it's own desperate stand,
Feasting on my leftover tears.
False idols, pagan rites and a crown full of thorns,
Aborted and still, I was never ever to be born.
Silent choirs spreading ancient lies,
In the midst of a billion muted sighs.
Millions of souls cry out in anguish,
Will I be cleansed before I die?
The sands of time never will run,
There is just one thing left to be done.
Take my soul to the darkest of realms,
Reality is just my only dream.
Secrets echo beyond these stone walls,
With tears in my eyes, I can muster a scream.
2007-12-15 07:15:10 · 9 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I thought your poem was outstanding and so wekk written in all.It was reallt Dark' but you know me i love dark' and i love you.!!!! Your words were so sad and hard to read as i don;t think it;s fair that you should have to feel so much pain...I want you to know that thru these harsh times i will always be here for you no matter what' or where,,,,,
2007-12-15 08:35:44 · answer #1 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-11 08:44:30 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ON a technical point of view, I like poetry with rhymes. ON a topic point of view, it's an interesting way to see time. One's end of time. Quite black, but who knows, could be true.
2007-12-15 07:24:23 · answer #3 · answered by WhanTuhe * 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Looks like a future Disney movie to me.
2007-12-15 07:19:15 · answer #4 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Ah yes, life is a dream. A dark one.
2007-12-16 02:30:46 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
With all due respect...I re-named that day to be henceforth known as "SATIREday" and it might relate to this???
2007-12-15 07:26:56 · answer #6 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Chillingly inspirational my friend *^_^*
2007-12-15 07:56:24 · answer #7 · answered by TrollHunter 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is indeed very nice
2007-12-15 07:41:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
amazing...
-M
2007-12-15 14:54:48 · answer #9 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋