"Two birds with one stone"
(both topics suggested to me, in the same poem)
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Is that cupcakes, I smell?
Chocolate's scent, from where the oven dwells?
It is cupcakes! I could eat a pound.
Can't wait to hear the oven door's sound.
Fresh and hot and round!
I could finish you in a bite!
But I savor you slowly, enjoying your life.
My savior so holy, is that you I see?
Come quick everybody!
Jesus is back! On my cupcake!
Well, would you look at that!
Jesus is pulling my teeth out and making me fat!
O! holy cupcakes! Thou must be divine!
To have shown my Lord and savior on such a tasty flavor!
My sister found you and ate you...
have you forgave her?
©J.M. (12/14/07)
2007-12-15 06:00:44 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
No offense to any religion.
Offense is meant to cupcakes though, for trapping the savior on it's devil's food.
2007-12-15 06:02:24 · update #1
Anybody think this is funny, as intended?
2007-12-15 06:07:36 · update #2
Why you wonderfully funny, sacriligious, person you! Hats off to you for this poem!!!
Life is a sweet pleasure, and isn't life to be lived to the fullest?
So, SWEET UP!!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter
2007-12-15 06:37:24 · answer #1 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
- quite a mouthful indeed. either it's absurd, "My sister found you and ate you.../have you forgave her?" or it's a modest justification of Nietzsche-an existentialist declaration that god is dead, "Jesus is pulling my teeth out and making me fat!/ O! holy cupcakes! Thou must be divine!"
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2007-12-17 11:37:00 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋