I posted this here cause I like it here so tell me what do think of this poem
there's rain falling softly on my face,
like tears from the angels above.
are they feeling lonely like me,
have they lost somebody they love.
the winds seem to carry a song,
a melody sad and forlorn.
even the clouds hide the sun,.
to let not a cold heart be warm
the long day can be weathered sometimes,
intrusions of hurt fills the night.
it's then that the tormentor smiles,
while the sleepless lay watch till light.
it cant always turn out this way,
the giving of love has to be.
so I will wait in line with the others,
and hope there is some love left for me.
2007-12-15 02:21:37 · 10 answers · asked by ? 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
yes I wrote it and many more but some are to personal to post on here :)
2007-12-15 02:31:07 · update #1
I love it !! I love poems anyway, they are such a great way to open your heart to someone & to let everything out on paper. I only wish I had a talent like yours :) Keep up the great work....post more if you like.....& don't worry one day you will find love when you're least expecting it
2007-12-15 03:31:18 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ £ðx¥ Ðå痢 ♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awww that is so sweet lol if you wrote it you are very deep, and a guy with a great big heart...
2007-12-15 10:29:53 · answer #2 · answered by sweet kiss 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it was a very nice poem but it was kinda hard to keep a rythm
2007-12-15 10:27:03 · answer #3 · answered by GOLDENFAIRY 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is sad, but beautiful. Keep your head up.
2007-12-15 10:25:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is really good for a guy!!! It is good for you to show your sappy side!
2007-12-15 11:15:02 · answer #5 · answered by Hopelessly Devoted 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2007-12-15 10:25:14 · answer #6 · answered by DEF LEPPARDS GIRL™ 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good!
2007-12-15 10:29:19 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's lovely, nice job.
2007-12-15 10:25:20 · answer #8 · answered by The French Connection 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its nice :)
2007-12-15 10:27:20 · answer #9 · answered by Kat girl 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
7.75/10
Very, VERY solid.
2007-12-15 10:26:05 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋