Should I be less grateful; simply more amused?
I don't know... I feel as though it could be truth...
Feeling winds gently blow, mind grows quickly.
My heart not feeling all so sure though; can it be protected?
I'm extremely proud to be an American; my past is respected.
If I'm called upon I'd know I'd show. My feet aren't rooted.
Would my strategems be useful; would I be recruited?
I would never let my home team down. I'd help as best I can.
After all, I'm of a military fam...I had wished to be a soldier.
And then, my dear friends I surely did get older.
I love you so much I can hardly speak of my love!
You being angels I know, I can love and respect.
My heart and mind be with you all day. Oh may...
May I please, say I love you so?
2007-12-15 00:54:39 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Quirky, well written and clever, easy to follow, nice flow that is and grammatically sound, good imagery and thoughful, well done.
2007-12-15 01:08:25 · answer #1 · answered by kissaled 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You write questions which people have tried to answer since ancient times...we are no closer to the answers...and, I don't think we'll find those answers, because of our diversities in culture and origins of ancestry.
Excellent poem!!! To have the ending lines of such a questioning poem, end with lines of love is so nicely achieved!!! Continue writing!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter
2007-12-15 10:10:46 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
HEY THIS IS NOT A POEM.did i really answer this in poetry category???????????
2007-12-15 11:52:46 · answer #3 · answered by jahaan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋