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Round and round…
Round round round until
You’re wound down
Spinning down…
Down down down, until
You’re on the ground
Hear the hounds
Hounds hounds hounds until
You’re water bound
Drowning now…
Drown drown drown until
The bottom’s found
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2007-12-14 16:06:33 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You're tinkering with alliteration here, and just plain having fun doing it!
Atta boy!!! Just tinker, till that idea hits! BLAM!
Maybe the Hound(s) of the Baskervilles chased you into the Irish Channel....ideas yet? Okay! I'll have more coffee!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter
2007-12-15 01:36:57 · answer #1 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like an Otter hunt.
2007-12-15 00:41:41 · answer #2 · answered by TWOBOB 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not my style, but still, you can draw a picture very well
2007-12-14 16:52:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it so so much...it reminds me of this though:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEHg-3o35DI
=)
2007-12-14 16:41:42 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
no
2007-12-14 16:15:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋