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One Day Soon
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

One day soon I'll look up,
And see my Lord right in front of me.
At that moment,
Remember all the things He's done for me.
Then fall to my face,
Worshipping His Holy Name.
All the while rejoicing,
That He finally came.
That's how it will be,
One evening.
One morning.
One afternoon.
That's how it will be one day soon.

One day soon,
The old things will pass away.
New things will flourish,
On the morn of a new day.
Precious stones shall lay,
Right beneath my feet.
Every soul in presence,
Will be complete.
Will be renewed.
Will be on display.
That's how it will be one day.

2007-12-14 11:57:44 · 12 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

12 answers

Well Semper,your poem definitely shows your devotion to God,hence the name Semper FI,not just a devotion to the Corp., but to a righteous life.Your poem eloquently shows our God, Jesus Christ,is coming to cleanse the tyranny man has done,to restore a beautiful peaceful land. Most importantly,your poem shows your love of God,and the appreciation you have for your blessings.This is a wonderful piece of work,that would definitely compliment a Thomas Kincaid painting.

2007-12-14 12:52:16 · answer #1 · answered by soulshadow7669 3 · 1 1

You have done it again! I hope you are keeping up with all of your poems. Maybe someday the Lord will see fit to put them all in a book form so that the whole world can get the same blessings that you give those of us who are a part of this forum.

Just remember why we do what we do. We do what we do and we do what we can do because we love the Lord.And we love the Lord because he first loved us.

May God continue to bless you Semper Fi you are a great blessing to others.

2007-12-14 22:01:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

That one day
Shall I see the beauty
The most precious beauty
God has created
In none other than heaven
The pearls of the gates
The gems all laid out
The mansion
My room
That Jesus prepares for me
I shall thank Jesus
That I get to experience that beauty
All because He laid down His life for me
One day
I shall enjoy eternity with my Best Friend
The One
Who does things no human
Can do
And want to do
One day
Jesus will dry my tears away
And let me know in His own comforting way
Everything will be alright
Shall I feel no more pain
Nor struggles
Never again knowing what it's like
To feel Satan's presence
In my thoughts,words, and action.
Shall my work be pleasing to God all the more there
Than it is here on earth
Please God
Help show me the way
While on earth
Give me the directions to Your heavenly kingdom
What it takes for me to hear the best words ever
" You're name is in the Book Of Life. Well Done
Thy faithful servant!"
Because nothing means anything truly
If I don't please God and be with Him someday.
Jesus, I want to show you through my thoughts
Words
And action
I appreciate what you did for me
And why you did it!
That one sweetest day!

Praise the Lord! Hallelujah!

2007-12-14 20:35:40 · answer #3 · answered by Яɑɩɳɓɵw 6 · 3 0

Friendly Advice to A Lot of Young Men

Go to Tibet
Ride a camel
Read the Bible
Dye your shoes blue
Grow a beard
Circle the world in a paper canoe
Subscribe to the Saturday Evening Post
Chew on the left side of your mouth only
Marry a woman with one leg and shave with a
straight razor
and carve your name in her arm
Brush your teeth with gasoline
Sleep all day and climb trees at night
Be a monk and drink buckshot and beer
Hold your head under water and play the violin
Do a belly dance before pink candles
Kill your dog
Run for mayor
Live in a barrel
Break your head with a hatchet
Plant tulips in the rain
but
Don't write poetry

(From Run with the Hunted by Charles Bukowski, a favorite poet of Hollywood unwashed). More of Buk's wisdom for would-be writers http://pokerpulse.com/news/viewtopic.php?p=3187#3187

2007-12-14 20:07:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

Semper....This gift the Lord has blessed you with is nothing short of amazing. It fills my heart with a comforting peace that is much needed at this time in my life. May God continue to work in you and through you my friend.

2007-12-14 20:11:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 4 0

Reborn,
I simply admire your devotion to the belief you hold.

Have a wonderful day my friend!

Semper Fi,
Gerry :)

2007-12-15 07:53:56 · answer #6 · answered by Gerry 7 · 1 0

It's a very beautiful poem...and as the person said above, I agree with you...One day...

MollyWobbleSRz

2007-12-14 20:07:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I love it. I hope judgement day will be like this.

2007-12-14 20:47:34 · answer #8 · answered by Mia 6 · 1 0

I'm not the poem type but its pretty good.

2007-12-14 20:09:27 · answer #9 · answered by gabe 3 · 1 0

That is great, and I soooo agree with you...
ONE DAY!!!! (sigh)

2007-12-14 20:05:29 · answer #10 · answered by Kerilyn 7 · 3 0

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