heavens' pain
She sits upon her velvet throne,
With blood she rules, the evil drone.
Do not you see the darkness dear?
The cursed night filled with fear.
Revenge for all the lives you took,
My agony is all I seem to feel.
Pain is just a fact of life,
A life that now is torn with strife.
Cut off your nose to spite her face,
Forgiveness now is for the weak.
Before the reign of heavens pain,
I dare you know, just don't complain.
You have ripped my heart apart,
How many times must this be done?
I love you now this time forever,
How many times I start anew.
Give into your dark desires,
Your old cuts, to be admired.
Get down on your knees and beg,
It seems so funny, no one leaves alive.
2007-12-14 08:17:12 · 10 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it seems this poem was written in a mood of anger, pain and despair
2007-12-15 02:26:13 · answer #1 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I loved this poem Baby as i do them all' but what really touched my heart and brought me your sadness was You have ripped my heart apart' How many times times must it be done? I love you now this time forever ' How many times i start anew,,I feel the same kind of pain' probably not the same but equally as devastating.... I do love you Baby ....
2007-12-15 04:21:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, judging from your mass transit poem, it makes a great environment. you can people watch and even though you're surrounded by people, you can keep to yourself and write down your thoughts.
2016-05-23 23:32:34 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Another star for the bus.. I think you need to buy the bus, it's great inspiration for you. Well done, good rhythm, as well as word flow.
2007-12-14 08:53:02 · answer #4 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem i really like all of the words you put and the feelings that come thru... really great shelly
2007-12-14 08:37:42 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could call it: Ode to a Bus Driver
2007-12-14 08:20:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked the first two lines, it seemed promising, but then it got worse and ended up geing pretty darn bad.
2007-12-14 08:21:11 · answer #7 · answered by Matthew O 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
oh WOW what a wonderful fantastic poem it's lovely keep writing
2007-12-14 08:27:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
so the title dark prince not for nothing yeah cool
2007-12-14 08:20:47 · answer #9 · answered by emma_undoo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are right,, these are poems that flyy would love.. it rly is good, great base and follow up..perfect topic.. gotta love it!
2007-12-14 10:15:14 · answer #10 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋