First Kiss
Moonlight among us
Stars in the skies
Something about you
Puts a twinkle in my eyes
And as I think
About you day and night
You are just sitting there
Flashing a smile so bright
Our eyes interlock
We know what’ll take place
As you come closer
The moon reflecting on your face
I come forward
Our lips together
And they felt as I dreamed
Light as a feather
We both put apart
You let me wear your jacket
My dreams have come true
And no feeling could match it
We walk home
I try to reminisce
The feeling I had
When I had my first kiss
2007-12-14 06:47:42 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Thanks! It makes me feel real nice that someone appriciates my poems. I know you cant answer the question but check out my other poems.
2007-12-14 06:57:00 · update #1
aww ni ni..
u should give it 2 our boo 4 christmas.. im gonna star this question bcause i love it!!
2007-12-14 08:46:09 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not unavoidably would desire to rhyme even though it needs to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is considerable besides. i do no longer elect to 2d wager what i'm examining approximately. I consistently seek for what I term "poetic gem stones"in the text cloth.
2016-10-11 07:08:43 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was a very nice poem. I like it because I could understand it. Some people poems are like another language.
2007-12-14 06:51:19 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very sweet! I really enjoyed it. Good luck with future poems.
2007-12-14 06:57:19 · answer #4 · answered by jasmin2236 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, 10 out of 10!!!
2007-12-14 06:53:47 · answer #5 · answered by remoserjr107 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem alot! Good Job!
2007-12-14 06:50:24 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty damn good. You must really love your partner. You should frame it and give it to him for Christmas. Good luck for your future.
2007-12-14 06:56:27 · answer #7 · answered by Ms Angel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i loved it can you make some poems lol i might need you for my poem maker lol how many rating does a critic give??? five stars right??? i give 6 stars
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2007-12-14 06:53:18 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so cute...very good...what a lucky Mr. Bryan:-)
2007-12-14 06:51:41 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow, wonderful.
2007-12-14 06:50:21 · answer #10 · answered by b n r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋