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Crocuses are just two months away
Tulips and the Daffodils are not that far behind
In time, we’ll sow the seeds, we’ll feed the trees
Build trellises for vines entwined
And fill the starter trays inside
With herbs and greens and sweet young things
Like paradise,
Spring garden…nice…
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2007-12-14 05:59:58 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Visions of springtime, warm blankies, wool socks
Fireplace roaring, and a crispy fried duck
I like your warm poem, It feels like euphoria
But those kinds of visions
Are only brought on by hypothermia..
2007-12-14 10:10:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
How I WISH I'd see just ONE message in a poem of yours!!!!
In this one, I see the garden, Spring, flowers, etc...BUT, I also see the stages of life, bringing children into the world and nurturing them(trellises for vines entwined), 'sowing the seeds' of life's adventures, and, 'in time' feeding the trees with our death(nutrients for those trees). It is the 'starter trays' that we are, all culminating 'like Paradise' in Forever.
You, sir, are one FINE poet!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter
2007-12-14 06:27:27 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes, it would be nice, but two months seem like an eternity to me. Wish I had some starter trays.
2007-12-14 06:56:18 · answer #3 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Oh! it makes me long for the days of Spring right now. I love my Gardens of Flowers and the first sign of Spring.
Beautiful as always- Very,Very Good!
I'm enjoying as usual~
2007-12-14 06:28:22 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Nice one to plant on us and see what kind of replies crop up in your contacts fertile minds. I'd better leaf well enough alone and let you harvest other answers.
2007-12-14 07:11:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Quite bouncy TD *^_^* It's a refreshing write indeed @)~>~
2007-12-14 07:44:13 · answer #6 · answered by TrollHunter 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Speechless again! I will retort, I just want it to be a good one!
2007-12-14 06:09:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Aaaaaah....nice images on this cold, grey, weary day...
2007-12-14 06:14:03 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Very nice!! You have talent!!
2007-12-14 07:13:37 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Summer holidays....Yay!!!! =)
--->i love the feeling and images this poem gave me...
2007-12-14 07:13:12 · answer #10 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋