Who could help me refine my expression with better English?

Question

As a senior student, I face different types of lives to choose from, such as being a civil servant, creating my own business and working in a company. However, those are not appealing, meaningful and challenging enough to me. Only academic research could satisfy my curiosity toward the diverse society and help me to absorb the precious thoughts of those great minds.

Can i say" I find that only academic research could satisfy my curiosity to the complex society and my urge to learn the precious thoughts of great minds."

Answer 1

As a senior student, I am at the crossroads of life, where I have to make a choice between many careers, such as being a civil servant, setting up a businees or taking up a company job. However, they dont appeal to me as much as academic research.
Academic Research challenges me to understand society as an amalgamation of diversities and satisfies my urge to understand and analyse the precious thoughts of great minds.

Answer 2

As a senior, I will soon need to choose one of the many future options open to me . I could become a civil servant, work for a company or an organization, or create a business of my own.

However, I do not find these options appealing, meaningful or challenging. Academic research is the only field that satisfies my curiosity about society's diversity. It is my primary goal to use that research to study and absorb the thoughts and ideas of the great men and women who have preceded me.

Answer 3

As a senior student, I face various options for my life work. I could create my own business or work for another company. However these choices are not appealing for me. I find that only academic research could satisfy my curiosity, absorbing the precious thoughts of great minds and finding meaning in the diverseness of society.

I'm not an expert on English but I found your paragraph a little difficult to understand. I hope I simplified it without losing the meaning.