Please stop the weeping
please stop the weeping!
i can hear it I can hear it! ! !
though it's muffled it echoes
i can't bear this
stop the mourning!
i cannot make you happy
I know...
I am lost myself
how can i make you feel better?
i am drowning quicker
how can i save you?
I love you...i am weakened
i lost the strength
I lost the will
I am tired
i am still...
I'm sorry...
I'm sorry....
Please stop the weeping
It's unbearable
I don't know what else to do....
2007-12-13 15:12:28 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
having seen many loved ones die...this brought me to tears.
I know the pain the guilt and the helplessness that this poem
comes from.
keep writing...you've touched me!!!
((HUGS))
2007-12-13 15:22:16 · answer #1 · answered by A*MUSE 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This "chaotic poem" echoes the poet's feelings of chaos while trying to deal with her own sorrow and that of others. She feels tired, at the end of her strength, remorseful, and even as if she's drowning in the moment. She asks, "how can I make you feel better?" It's a rhetorical question, because the poet knows it's impossible, so all she can do is beg the listener to stop the weeping. It's chaotic only in that the emotions are out of control.
2007-12-13 20:41:14 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-11 06:13:19 · answer #3 · answered by buswell 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is almost unbearable in it's pathos, such an outpouring of emotion. I hope it was cathartic to write, and that you had some sense of alleviation of pain. The poem itself is very effective. I got a lot out of reading it. Thank you.
2007-12-13 15:42:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
your poem was fantastic in getting the sad heartbroke feeling of losing a family member or a great friend,When my mom passed i felt almost just like the poem says' as you feel like life will never have any happiness again and learn to live with our pain' and sorrow,
2007-12-13 17:38:52 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is ok, life does get easier to deal with.
Sorry for your loss.
2007-12-13 15:22:11 · answer #6 · answered by Diana 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sad writing no doubt, and not really what I would call A POEM :)
2007-12-14 03:50:36 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it is really good it explains how i was feeling when my father died last year and how you feel for monthws and years later and how you want to help the rest of your family cope but then you forget about helping your self
it is really good
2007-12-13 15:25:39 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
i lost many love ones to .i know how you truly feel..
2007-12-14 09:34:06 · answer #9 · answered by Snuggles 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I FEEL YOUR PAIN
I UNDERSTAND,
I TOO HAVE BEEN THERE
IT WILL EASE,
BLESS YOU !!!
YOU'VE EXPRESSED YOURSELF WELL THROUGH THE CHAOS
2007-12-13 15:18:13 · answer #10 · answered by flossymae 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋