Please, hold my hand,
and save me from the fall.
Tell me I'm worth it,
please, tell me I'm worth it all.
I'm sorry I try too hard,
I'm sorry that I care.
I'm sorry I listened to the lies,
I'm sorry that they're there.
I'm sorry that I love you,
too much or not enough?
I'm sorry that I'm only
a bit of useless fluff.
I'm sorry that I tried,
I'm sorry I believed you.
I'm sorry I'm human,
I wish you were too.
I'm sorry I'm imperfect,
I knew it all along,
I only had to wait,
'till you could hear the song.
Tell me when it's over,
tell me when we're through.
Tell me when I've pushed too hard,
tell me when I kill you.
2007-12-13 12:09:56 · 2 answers · asked by Rarbizu!! 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Thank you! =]
2007-12-13 12:22:08 · update #1
quite a sad poem!
Keep on composing more poems.
These lines are ironical and quite emotionally loaded:
I'm sorry I'm human,
I wish you were too.
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2007-12-14 16:04:07 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is sooooooooooooooo pretty! i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i especially like the, "i'm sorry i'm human, i wish you were too" part. you're a really good poet.
2007-12-13 20:16:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋