What do you think??

Question

I was the one
Who always sat alone

I was the one
Who didn't have a home

I was the one
That was never around

I was the one
Who lay bleeding on the ground

I was the one
That cried in the stall


I was the one
Who wrote on the wall


I was the one
That needed a friend

I was the one
Whos life I would end

I was the one
Who inside was dead

I was the one
Whose heart always bled

I was the one
That needed you


I was the one
The only one, that ever knew

I was the one
But no longer am
For I have taken my life
With my own hands.

Answer 1

It's a decent piece. Hopefully you've sought help? AND certainly don't commit any bodily harm before you read our answers.

So much a therapy piece I also hope. AND then hope that "taken my life" is purely metaphorical.

I think in your last lines you've pretty much excused whomever brought you to the point of expressing them. Obviously ending ones own life is most often a permanent solution to a temporary problem and without getting too Romeo and Juliette, not a valid solution.

Steven Wolf

Answer 2

Key phrase there "with MY OWN"...

Nice rhyme tho.

Last verse could be:

And now I'm standing here and no one sees or hears me...
That didn't solve anything.