I'm kicking facts snapping necks and snatching checks.
Catching wreck hit the deck before you meet my tech.
My rap skills second to none my compettition get done.
I got a big gun and I'm constantly shaking down everyone.
Climbing the ladder to success I want it all nothing less.
I just want to be on top of hip hop because I'm the best.
2007-12-13 09:52:36 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Rap and Hip-Hop
I dunno Corey. I am not a good judge of rap. Have you thought about producing?
2007-12-13 15:46:48 · answer #1 · answered by The Evolution of T. 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Aw, how nice! That's such a cute, stab you in the chest, let the blood spill, and make it rain rap! Keep at it buddy!=>
2007-12-13 23:37:18 · answer #2 · answered by Oh, it's like that? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Average...but dont quit trying...
Im just the type that likes consistency....If you start your rhyme with "Im kickin facts" then go into a bunch of fantasy...then it just sounds like your putting words together.. You gotta have some content when you rap....
2007-12-13 18:30:13 · answer #3 · answered by Mr. Woodcock Dilla 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Your Lyrics are Very Impressive but once again.
I can't determin your Delivery,Flow.
But you do have good lyrics.
2007-12-13 18:07:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
You did a GREAT job. Are you thinking of becoming a rapper? I think that you should because you are so good at it! P.S. You area great contact friend! :)
2007-12-13 18:23:56 · answer #5 · answered by Elizabeth M 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
good wordplay. can't really say anything else cuz i didn't hear your delivery but the lyrics is there. keep writing
2007-12-13 17:56:47 · answer #6 · answered by Audamar 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
PRETTY SWEET!
Prolly better if I could actually hear it from u!
But yea pretty good!
2007-12-13 18:00:26 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
lol awww
2007-12-13 18:01:17 · answer #8 · answered by ashley 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
lol...raps not that great but yours is ok....
2007-12-13 17:57:01 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋