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If you look right here,
Between my ears
You’ll see me being only me
…Just as I appear

If you take the time
To hear my rhyme
You’ll know to know that I’m
Not near as near…can be

If you see in me
Hypocrisy
Then mirror has…reversibility,
Indeed…

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2007-12-13 02:22:39 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

I go too fast

Then THE mirror has....

2007-12-13 02:49:00 · update #1

9 answers

i like this one because but this one connects more like rap than the other.

2007-12-13 03:20:44 · answer #1 · answered by Idonplay 5 · 1 0

I'm not what I appear to be either. Maybe I should run for political office?

2007-12-13 06:09:50 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1 0

Great job, TD, happy birthday again

2007-12-13 04:32:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I loved your poem T.D. and it really has a great message and it rocks,,Thanks for always sharing

2007-12-13 07:52:21 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1 0

Well written, Awesome job.
* gives two thumbs up*
:)

2007-12-13 02:28:52 · answer #5 · answered by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 · 2 0

I like it

2007-12-13 02:31:27 · answer #6 · answered by older mom 4 · 2 0

cool man

2007-12-13 02:41:34 · answer #7 · answered by Toni A 4 · 1 0

Loves it...

2007-12-13 02:30:04 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2 0

i truly like it. haha.. =)

2007-12-13 03:21:51 · answer #9 · answered by Ida 2 · 1 0

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