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I’m free to be bitter
Twisting words
What I say
Ash is my whiteness
My legacy
Streetlight transaction
Works to me
Advantage is what’s taken
I’m free to be broke
Categorized
What I pay
Brown is my blackness
My heresy
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TD Euwaite
2007-12-13 02:14:36 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You write very well,
In spite of your age.
EDIT:
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2007-12-13 03:31:19 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
TD Euwaite is a very gifted poet. He's posted some really great stuff on here!!!
Good choice. I wonder if it is your truth though or someone elses? It would have been better is you had written it yourself. BUT.....if all else fails call on ole TD Euwaite!!!
2007-12-13 02:24:48 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love the free form, depth, and darkness in an awakening way. Makes me wonder what is between the lines. Very nice. I don't generally care for poetry.
2007-12-13 02:26:27 · answer #3 · answered by reynwater 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Could you redo that as 3 limericks. The thoughts are good, but I'm down with Irish Haiku.
2007-12-13 02:33:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not a bad poem for a guy your age. Glad this birthday has freed you to do and write as you wish.
2007-12-13 06:08:13 · answer #5 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You call that a poem?
Very nice offering, and thanks for sharing it with us. You are too generous with that, but I remain glad you do. Hope you have a great birthday, bud. Have another star for it.
2007-12-13 04:34:07 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
you are definitely free to write anything you like. i don't understand poetry very well. but i am glad you wrote some.
2007-12-13 03:17:25 · answer #7 · answered by Idonplay 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
loved it well written
kind of soothing and touchin!!
2007-12-13 02:20:45 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I ADORE THAT POEM IT IS VERY WELL WRITTEN. IT TOUCHES ME
2007-12-13 02:23:18 · answer #9 · answered by Hurrikayne Hayze 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it could've ended better. but otherwise, it's iite.
2007-12-13 02:18:17 · answer #10 · answered by bowash11221 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋