okay can someone please help me write a poem..about friends. or anything..but it cant be about winter/holidays/ or life...it has to have like alliteration and rhythm and stuff! it also has to be original! thankss a lott!
2007-12-12 11:01:15 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Friends are what we
Aspire to be
If I didn't have friends
I wouldn't be me
Through sorrow and pain
And without disdain
They carry me through
every torrentious rain
I believe when you have
Good friends to defend
You have reason to strive
Towards a better end
2007-12-12 11:44:15 · answer #1 · answered by :) 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
1. Make an attempt at a poem at least, and I will gladly help you out.
2. I'm not going to write an entire poem for you.
3. Include more details about what you would like help with.
2007-12-12 11:13:15 · answer #2 · answered by evanwhisper17 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's not too bad. I would advise changing the first verse though. The whole line about hunger being cold can be misinterperated. Try rearranging the words. PLay around with it abit. How bout.... Look into my eyes Those of which are filled with pain Hunger hurts the worst, it seems to never wane
2016-05-23 07:10:45 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Friends
The ones you can depend on when you need a helping hand
People who try to make you smile when you feel like your to your upmost end
Open arms to hold you tight when you need warmth
Sisters to the end when they know there could be harm
what would we do if we didn't have them?
Even if we know sometimes we take them for granted
They make us stronger even if they say things we don't like
We will always stay together no matter what, really tight.
Friends people that show you don't have to be family to care!
(Hope I helped)!!!
2007-12-12 11:13:24 · answer #4 · answered by lil_b 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'd be glad to help you, but first, you need to make an effort. Think of a friend you really care for and describe him/her. Then post your poem and the community will check it out and make suggestions for you.
2007-12-12 11:06:52 · answer #5 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
if your trying to get someone else to write it just look at the ones under poetry and copy there jeeze ha ha that's messed up but maybe you should ask first.. if you want to get inspired go to a park and sit under a tree and just wait go somewhere where ppl will be just sit and listen you will get inspired from the atmosphere
2007-12-12 11:06:30 · answer #6 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I love my friends
We rock and roll
Though without them
We won't be whole.
I love my friends
We're all so crazy
We are adventurous
And never lazy.
I love my friends
We're always together
Are we ever apart?
Not ever, not never.
2007-12-12 11:13:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
mhhh
roses are red
violets are blue
eww i just smelled a stinky shoe
it brings tears to my eyes just reading it
2007-12-16 04:34:07 · answer #8 · answered by Bonnie :) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
please add more details!! do you want us to write a poem, the beginning, ideas. WHAT?? Im confused so please add details so people can help!!
listen to elaine though and go to writing.com to post the poem. People can rate your work and add comments and suggestions or tell you its perfect!!!! : - )
http://www.writing.com
2007-12-12 11:07:01 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
"it also has to be original!"
concerned about that, really?
(Wow, Psyber whipped that out fast, I'm impressed)
2007-12-12 11:05:40 · answer #10 · answered by DR V 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋