Carry Me. Any Thoughts?

Question

In the forgotten hour
I find you in my darkest dreams
and distorted realities.
You are the dream which has no foundation
and therefore I love you.
Damning shadow,
beautiful recognition of the darkness
that was never within you,
yet you hunger for it,
seek it out in another...their taste,
their touch,
you crave and you desire and I am ever there,
knowing you through your longings and deceptions.
What brought about the coldness and the grandeur,
fallen at the feet of a woman who could be
an angel, a goddess, a shining star.
Will you cloister yourself away forever?
Who are you? What are you?
My goddess, I love you and trust you...
a symbol burnt upon your breast,
the pain and the seared flesh...is it all for me?
I need you, carry me into this world
and the next.
I am your guardian angel.

Answer 1

After just reading and responding to your previous submission; this to me; reads as though you've written it to yourself.

In fact; this seems to tie in with the previous piece in that you may already have; or intend to; BE your BEST support system.

It also reads as a retrospective/introspective piece; designed to be self affirming; which it certainly can be.

Steven Wolf

Answer 2

Spirit writing again I see. I think you're channeling me. This poem shows your realization that you are something and someone worthy of...worthiness, for lack of a better thought. I love the way you question yourself and tell yourself that you're not as dark as you think you are. I especially love the "you are the dream which has no foundation." You don't have a foundation, but you should start building one. I'd have to say that this is one of my favorites.

Answer 3

I see you in the piece... that's all i can really say.

P.S.
give the first guy best answer, that was f***** aw some!

Answer 4

You make me want to cry honestly...