will today be special .... will I be made to feel good ....
I am here to tell you that you are the best ....
you are the woman who lights up my life ....
the beautiful lady who makes me feel bright ....
when I stare so deeply .... way down to your soul .....
I can see all the beautiful love that you hold .....
everytime I kiss your sweet tender lips ....
my knees start to shake .... my hearts filled with bliss
yes you are my woman .... no other compares ....
without you my darling .... I grow ever weak ....
for you are my life .... yes you make me complete ....
sincerely,
jerry aka poet man
2007-12-12 01:06:38 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Does this woman have a name? She is a very lucky woman...whomever she is!!! I think you just like making all of us SWOON!!! Don't Ya Jerry? hehe *wink* ;o)
2007-12-12 04:51:54 · answer #1 · answered by F-1 says KISS IT! 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Wow! that's really nice. Lucky woman. You should put this in the poetry section. I bet it will get a lot of interesting stars. Mine is there now. You are a true poet my friend.
2007-12-12 01:38:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Jerry This is a very good poem
you ought to publish them all together in book of
"Love of someone dear " Suggested title
2007-12-12 06:06:32 · answer #3 · answered by NIFman 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Well I read this as if it were directed at the reader, me. And it made me feel special. It also made me think. Now that is TALENT.
When your words touch me enough to make me feel that is quite good, when they make me think, that is TALENT. Never stop writing.
2007-12-12 04:56:03 · answer #4 · answered by jjoy4444 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I already feel special, however my friend you are very talented and this was sweet of you
2007-12-12 01:10:21 · answer #5 · answered by dreamyfairy 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
oh geez, this is unreal.
lol.
2007-12-12 01:11:32 · answer #6 · answered by Lola 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋