its 2:30 am
you havent slept in days
havent left the house in weeks
tidal waves of overwhelming depression and hopelessness
hit you with such force,that if you listen
you hear your soul start to crack
what if it breaks?
2007-12-11 21:32:06 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
We can't truly know if this was written by you/for you; no offense; but we can assume it was.
The fact that you feel depression can't truly be "couched" here; but in writing this piece you've done some self therapy; which is often the object; when writing from the dark.
I suspect if this is a cry for help, and isn't strictly helping you to understand the WHY, and/or the HOW of healing; then you probably need help; beyond Q&A (again; no offense)
So many methods and theories exist with regard to writing out our pain. Two of the more relevant are writing, and burning the piece. OR writing and burying the piece. Both symbolic of shedding grief; depression; etc.
We don't have to "judge" any quality of this submission; nor might it be our place to; but obviously those who come here; often in pain, and share it in what they write; are seeking something.
Steven Wolf
2007-12-12 00:00:41 · answer #1 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well then it floods and emotions fly crazy and i guess if that is true life my stop not for real but metaphorically, sorrow is such aching and i have heard the cracking and i know what you mean but put a smile on your face and keep going i no people who have theire lives turned upside down like a washing machine and they manage to struggle through each day with a smile on ther face and even laugh and the simplest most beautiful things.
Smile it might make you feel better :-)
2007-12-12 00:10:39 · answer #2 · answered by Ash 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is very cool, except for the fact that it hits too close to home. Well said. TD
2007-12-12 00:44:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
try to figure out the reasons behind this depression & hopelessness!! .... study, u can change it... family, try to be calm & kind ...... work, try to be ambitious & like ur work .... love, tell ur lover ur feeling & u'll feel better,..... money issues try to make a good budget & u'll be happy .......... but don't give up hope .... remember good things in life & "dream" but while u r sleeping....
2007-12-11 21:55:33 · answer #4 · answered by mad world!! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dont worry. Be happy.
2007-12-11 21:38:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Then it breaks!
2007-12-11 21:35:44 · answer #6 · answered by Halo 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋