ok theres a kid and he goes to an elementary school and then he suspects his teacher is an alien? is that good. if there are better idea can some one help me!
2007-12-11 09:53:08 · 4 answers · asked by \\THE MAYOR// 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
If the teacher is an alien, does the teacher let the kid in on the secret, and then, for the rest of the story, do the teacher and the kid join forces against the community?
Or does only the kid know? Does the kid try, tentatively, to join forces with other kids, parents, teachers, with the danger that the others will not believe him, and that the alien teacher suspects his secret?
Mu-wha-ha-ha-ha!
2007-12-11 10:05:17 · answer #1 · answered by steve_geo1 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
There is a shallow plot line/characters to that so we don't really know. Start asking questions about the plot and about the characters. Who is your audience? Who are you trying to target? What are you writing for? Does this make sense?
Also, think about issues that happen with kids and teachers that happen in real life depending on what age group. Having a teacher kidnap someone and have them give the student an F are two different issues that require research about police, detectives, myths about aliens, and such. Everything needs to be researched. So, if you have good twists, a captive writing style, and everything else that makes people come back to a novel and reread it or suggest it, then yes it is a good idea. If not, think about it some more. Good luck and keep on writing!
2007-12-11 10:12:49 · answer #2 · answered by Tropical Kiwi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, it's pretty good for starters but you could say the boy's the only human and everyone else in the school except the boy's best friends are all some kind of creature.
2007-12-11 09:59:45 · answer #3 · answered by School Freak 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good start but you need to add more detailes before I can say "Its really good.
good luck !
2007-12-11 10:18:55 · answer #4 · answered by Kim H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋