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2007-12-10 19:14:11 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

6 answers

I don’t know what your looking for but try this.

Hardships and sorrows, for sometime are mine
There is no cure, other than red wine.
Service of the Old Magi I won't leave,
My own benefit, in this I define.
With light of the jug, ascend joyous heights
Fate and time may have another design.
Sign of godliness, is only Love
Amidst the pious, I see no such sign.
Alas, in spite of my wandering eyes,
Two mirrors can't show that face, divine.
You, tall spruce and pine, by my streaming eyes,
I see the waters, but not spruce and pine.
In my drunken state, no-one gives me wine,
No-one with the heart, himself would align.
Of the thing I loved, do not ask of me,
I have become naught, speck of dust so fine.
Hafiz's boat and I, only in this sea
Have pearls of words, that brightly shine.

have fun

2007-12-10 19:24:01 · answer #1 · answered by daniel 2 · 0 1

There are so many words that end "ine" I would need to know the topic to help you find one that fits. Some neutral ones are:
fine, divine, line, mine, and wine. But, based on the content of your poem, perhaps something specific, like wine or dandelion might work better.

2007-12-11 12:27:43 · answer #2 · answered by Glenn S 3 · 0 1

Certainly YOU can find dozens, and copy them or re-create them. Probably hundreds end with MINE; FINE or LINE.

Then there are words that will end sounding like EEEEEN.

If you're just trying to find one; I'm sure you can. If you're asking anyone here to create one for you; for your use; I find that a bit discomforting.

Steven Wolf

Given the time; I create you a rhyme
I'd even promise each line would be fine
However the work would always be Mine.

2007-12-11 07:28:46 · answer #3 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 1 1

There she walks, this love of mine
Wish I could write her a gentle line
I spend my time dreaming, till nine
Every evening when I meet her near the Rhine
I wish I'd drown myself in some deep wine
Rather than to love my love divine

2007-12-11 12:01:36 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1 0

a whole poem or just a line...? maybe post what you have so far and we can offer the line you need...

2007-12-11 03:50:38 · answer #5 · answered by kirmss 2 · 1 1

How many lines? About what? - please give us some more to work with here.

2007-12-11 03:17:51 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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