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Alomost a month ago I was camping with a group of friends, we were sitting by the fire and it was almost 11 o'clock. I went to find more logs for the fire and as I searched the trail walking farther and farther from the campsite I hear footsteps not from an animal, but from what sounds like a person, thinking its a campmember I try to beat them to thechase and scare them, I hide behind a tree and when the footsteps were nearly 5 ft away I jump out just so be tackled by some sort of hairy beast, the light of the full moon shined on the both of us and suddenly he bit me right on the side abdomen and ran jsut as a cloud covered the moon and he was too far for me to catch so I jsut sat and fell asleep and when I awoke there was nothing but a pentagaram where the huge gash was, now the full moon is coming out, I feel hot, sweaty my clothes feel tight my head drowsy. What is happening? I rip open my shirt to find hair growing outrageously, my teeth curling over my mouth
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oh the pain the unbearable pain, suddenly it felt like the beast inside of me has awoken. I felt strained by the clothes still tight around me so I ripped them off with great force leaving just me I felt as though my animal instincts were becoming me. No longer did i care about work or friends but blood and meat and I needed some I jumped out my apartment window and sniffed for meat I went to a place i kenw there was much the zoo. I feasted on all the animals and when the nightguard came by all I remember is tearing at his leg before he tranquilized me and I went drowsy. I woke in the morining naked in the zoo next to an unconcious security guard wondering what had happened. I also feel as though ive been reinvented I feel strong as ever. Hiding and ducking all the way home i noticed my window was broken and my clothes are uin shreds whay happened last night i wondered.
almost one moth later...
I still feel powerful and I quit my office job realizing more soon

oh the pain the unbearable pain, suddenly it felt like the beast inside of me has awoken. I felt strained by the clothes still tight around me so I ripped them off with great force leaving just me I felt as though my animal instincts were becoming me. No longer did i care about work or friends but blood and meat and I needed some I jumped out my apartment window and sniffed for meat I went to a place i kenw there was much the zoo. I feasted on all the animals and when the nightguard came by all I remember is tearing at his leg before he tranquilized me and I went drowsy. I woke in the morining naked in the zoo next to an unconcious security guard wondering what had happened. I also feel as though ive been reinvented I feel strong as ever. Hiding and ducking all the way home i noticed my window was broken and my clothes are uin shreds whay happened last night i wondered.
almost one moth later...
I still feel powerful and I quit my office job realizing more soon

oh the pain the unbearable pain, suddenly it felt like the beast inside of me has awoken. I felt strained by the clothes still tight around me so I ripped them off with great force leaving just me I felt as though my animal instincts were becoming me. No longer did i care about work or friends but blood and meat and I needed some I jumped out my apartment window and sniffed for meat I went to a place i kenw there was much the zoo. I feasted on all the animals and when the nightguard came by all I remember is tearing at his leg before he tranquilized me and I went drowsy. I woke in the morining naked in the zoo next to an unconcious security guard wondering what had happened. I also feel as though ive been reinvented I feel strong as ever. Hiding and ducking all the way home i noticed my window was broken and my clothes are uin shreds whay happened last night i wondered.
almost one moth later...
I still feel powerful and I quit my office job realizing more soon

oh the pain the unbearable pain, suddenly it felt like the beast inside of me has awoken. I felt strained by the clothes still tight around me so I ripped them off with great force leaving just me I felt as though my animal instincts were becoming me. No longer did i care about work or friends but blood and meat and I needed some I jumped out my apartment window and sniffed for meat I went to a place i kenw there was much the zoo. I feasted on all the animals and when the nightguard came by all I remember is tearing at his leg before he tranquilized me and I went drowsy. I woke in the morining naked in the zoo next to an unconcious security guard wondering what had happened. I also feel as though ive been reinvented I feel strong as ever. Hiding and ducking all the way home i noticed my window was broken and my clothes are uin shreds whay happened last night i wondered.
almost one moth later...
I still feel powerful and I quit my office job realizing more soon

oh the pain the unbearable pain, suddenly it felt like the beast inside of me has awoken. I felt strained by the clothes still tight around me so I ripped them off with great force leaving just me I felt as though my animal instincts were becoming me. No longer did i care about work or friends but blood and meat and I needed some I jumped out my apartment window and sniffed for meat I went to a place i kenw there was much the zoo. I feasted on all the animals and when the nightguard came by all I remember is tearing at his leg before he tranquilized me and I went drowsy. I woke in the morining naked in the zoo next to an unconcious security guard wondering what had happened. I also feel as though ive been reinvented I feel strong as ever. Hiding and ducking all the way home i noticed my window was broken and my clothes are uin shreds whay happened last night i wondered.
almost one moth later...
I still feel powerful and I quit my office job realizing more soon

i quit my job realizing it wasnt for the new powerful me I decided to sell things on internet sites for a living which is giving me little profit. Also the zoo has been shut down and the man who layed next to me unconcious about a month ago passed me and recognized me somehow and we have become friends, actually since i quit my job ive been bunking with him but he is out now and it is starting to get dark, its a full moon and i am lifting weights the only way i am keeping up with my power, suddenly the moon rises, shining right through the window and my friend (james) has just returned and almost simultaniously we both drop to the floor in agony and a flashback came back to me, this is what has happened a month ago I felt the beastrise again and I tore off my shirt jsut as James did to se the exeeding hair I know what i am what we are we are werewolves and we will hunt into the night part two coming soon =]

its a story ppl i want opinion
not alot of critisism

Answer 1

Have you considered switching to decaf?

Answer 2

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Answer 3

do you honestly think that you are a werewolf or do you want this edited?