how is this poem ?

Question

Flying high like the sun, soaring in the blue enormity of the mountain sky
Descending, like a rock dropping out of the heavens, 
Like a bolt of lightning, screeching as it races right down at its prey, Plunging into icy water with all of Earth's harshness
Reappearing from the water's darkness, climbing up, up into the sky, 
Shedding water off its wings, now glistening like diamonds, as it speeds, higher and higher into the crystal heavens
Stopping as it speeds its climb, 
It peaks, levels and circles once again
The world down below applauds at its feet, The wind whistles with amazement

The water sore from its ripping talons, which slashed the clear water's surface causing ripples, making only minimal noise compared to the damage it suffered

The Eagle, Nature's Predator.

Answer 1

You may want to post this in the poetry section.

Answer 2

very good poem

Answer 3

....yeah...