I just wrote this poem, but have no idea what title to use. Any ideas?
Poem#1
"Would I cry for him, if he were to die?
I think not
It is his fault I am broken
Crushed to a million
Billion
Tiny pieces of glass.
Neveragain to be put back again. {and I know neveragain has a space in the middle, I just wrote it like that 'cos it seems better.}
Broken forever
Forevermore.
Therefore, for you: I'll not mourn
For you I'll not cry
For you I'll not wish to come back to life
You caused naught but pain
Death is wise to welcome you
He is waiting, you know.
Waiting
For
You.
Amen."
So that was my poem. Any ideas? Thanks!
2007-12-10 04:43:59 · 7 answers · asked by Mnemosyne 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Good point, Medicine Woman--to any new readers, please ignore the 'Amen' at the end. It's not there. For reasons please read Medicine Woman's answer below.
2007-12-10 22:21:34 · update #1
Also, if you have any comments, please feel free to voice them--just remember to brainstorm for titles! Thx!
2007-12-10 22:25:11 · update #2
I would call it "Love Lost" because your love for him is gone. You care not what happens to him. You have pain and that is a part of a lost love. You shed all your tears and there are none left to cry all because of love. Take away the Amen, that makes it look like a prayer.
2007-12-10 05:34:26 · answer #1 · answered by Medicine Woman 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tears of Glass.
2007-12-10 05:23:55 · answer #2 · answered by Elaine P...is for Poetry 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Broken tears.
2007-12-10 04:48:22 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
"FOR YOU"
GURRL I WRITE POEMS LIKE THAT TOO.
THAT ONE IS DEEP.I FEEL YOU.
GUYS HURT US SO MUCH AND RELLY DON'T REALIZE IT TUIL WE END UP DUMPING THEM.
SOMETIMES WHEN I'M WITH A GUY WHO IS ACTING WRIGHT I BE LIKE I KNOW THIS N1GGA GONN' MESS SOMEWAY OR ANOTHER.
YOU FEEL ME GURRL.
ANYWAYS, YO POEM COOL.LOVE IT!!!!
HOLLA!!!!!!!!
2007-12-10 05:21:09 · answer #4 · answered by ~*~ shawty ~*~ 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What about "Me Without You"?
2007-12-10 08:50:04 · answer #5 · answered by regina falange 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Death is wise to welcome you" thats what i would name it if i wrote it : ) ( when i write i choose a word or words out of my poem to title it)
2007-12-10 05:40:34 · answer #6 · answered by cinnamon swirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the downfall of the devil?
2007-12-10 04:51:22 · answer #7 · answered by Danny Kellerman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋