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The Dream's Slave

Dream devil
Delighter
Night owl, swallow
Child frightener
Form, at the window

On with the light
Nighttime brightener
I fear, not you
Fool of the mist
My fist, ever tight for you

I'm awake, and through…
You, must abate from view
Take away your tools
And your opaque rules
Violation pools

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2007-12-10 01:48:44 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

6 answers

Just earning two points.
Or is that against,
some opaque rules.

2007-12-10 06:08:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

"The Dream's Slave," by Henry Buckworth Youngfellow....
...While I do like it, I've never seen/heard it before...I have heard of Henry (Wadsworth Longfellow).

Take away your tools
And your opaque rules
Violation pools

(That, and,
"My fist, ever tight for you,"
are the best parts, to me, in this one).

2007-12-10 04:32:26 · answer #2 · answered by Holiday Magic 7 · 1 0

I've known him very Long
since I was quite young
and Buck Henry was too
and perhaps so were you!

2007-12-10 03:39:58 · answer #3 · answered by The Dark Phool 2 · 2 0

Isn't it "Henry Wadsworth Longfellow"?

2007-12-10 01:52:04 · answer #4 · answered by Mimi B 4 · 1 1

Second time you posted this, what is the hidden message you want us to see?

2007-12-10 05:15:05 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

This is very good, there, Youngfellow.

2007-12-10 02:21:14 · answer #6 · answered by Ha'ole Boy! 2 · 1 0

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