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What do you think this poem is about?
I was born with oceans for eyes
and much like a wave it comes
love flowing trapped until it breaks and flows into hate
stirred only by them my precious pearls
it cannot run nor can it hide it has no direction all it can do is flow back into itself
and that's what it does and there it remains an endless vast of blues to teeter on
there's not a big enough life raft to save it
so the waves continue to pound and produce waterfalls over the lips letting you taste the salt of life
there will be no end to this,it will never drain nor can it ever evaporate all you can do it float,ride the waves and keep faith that you won't drown

do you think its good?

2007-12-09 23:33:13 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

6 answers

it is ok

2007-12-09 23:35:57 · answer #1 · answered by cheri h 7 · 0 0

its about a person rejected... not loved.. but he kept standing and tried to hold on-- it was a trial for him from someone but he just made what he can and is now stronger than once before...

faith, fidelity, perseverance

did u make this one?
i love it!

2007-12-09 23:43:36 · answer #2 · answered by mj 3 · 0 0

i think its an amazingly good poem but the meaning is all up to the author though i can always just guess which i have...do you want my hypothesis?

2007-12-09 23:40:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

it's about you and your life how unique or precious you are and it's good yeah it is.

2007-12-09 23:40:26 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

k it;s too deep for conman mankind

2007-12-09 23:44:30 · answer #5 · answered by Jacob 3 · 0 0

its about life and tears,its pretty good

2007-12-09 23:35:58 · answer #6 · answered by bowsgirl1 7 · 0 0

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