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It could lead to racial profiling and other methods of discrimination & harassment.

^thats the sentence^



i'm writing an essay, and so far i cannot think of a way to successfully reword the sentence so that it isnt plagarism.
this is in reference to the patriot act and how it can negatively affect americans.



thanks in advance!

2007-12-09 09:11:53 · 5 answers · asked by oh heyy 1 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

oh. btw-
this is in the form of a debate brief, so its just the sentence by itself....
woot. XD

2007-12-09 09:31:05 · update #1

5 answers

Maybe flip the sent around. Radical profiling and other methods of discrimination could lead to it(whatever it may be)

just my opinion. or could lead to:(something),

if u have more reasons to lead to

2007-12-09 09:15:59 · answer #1 · answered by devilgirl 2 · 0 0

The Patriot Act could incite discrimination and harassment, including racial profiling.


But you'd be better off not rewording sentence-by-sentence, but rather incorporating all this author's ideas into your own work. Is racial profiling a "method of discrimination & harassment"? Or would you characterize it some other way? What other "methods" could it lead to?

2007-12-09 09:27:27 · answer #2 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0 0

One possible negative outcome of the Patriot act is racial profiling and other forms of discrimination, which may lead to unequal treatment and harassment by law enforcement and other government officials.

2007-12-09 09:37:27 · answer #3 · answered by Lucy L 5 · 0 0

..., leading to methods of discrimination, like racial profiling

2007-12-09 09:27:55 · answer #4 · answered by ~Super_Ginger~ 4 · 0 0

".... the result would be discrimination & harrassment of individuals. Racial profiling is only one example....." (perhaps you could add others, too)

2007-12-09 09:18:29 · answer #5 · answered by dvatwork 7 · 0 0

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